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LEEROYYYYYYYY JHENNNNKINNNNNS!
Join Date: Oct 23 2009
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Creepy Monologue
INT. SNYDER LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Dawn lies on the couch, dimly lit. Pale light filters in from the kitchen, but otherwise all is dark. A shadowy figure walks slowly into the room and sits on the back of the couch looking down at her. DAWN’S MOTHER (translated from German) You might think that I don’t understand. But I do. There’s something that happens. You see a man every day for years. You love him. One night you look at him and there is a small voice in your mind. (beat) ‘What if I throw it all away?’ this voice asks. ‘He’s so beautiful.’ It says. ‘But time will take his beauty away. Would it not be better to take his beauty away yourself? Then it would belong to you. Time could not steal it away then.’ (beat) I see how you looked at the boy. I saw your fingers too. How they closed around the knife. I saw your eyes on his face. I know what you were thinking in that moment. You were listening to that small voice. (beat) We all know that voice. Your grandmother knew it well. And me. And you. (beat) So you see, I do understand. Dawn’s mother stands and walks slowly out of the room. |
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Join Date: Nov 21 2006
Location: Midwest
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Re: Creepy Monologue
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LEEROYYYYYYYY JHENNNNKINNNNNS!
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Re: Creepy Monologue
Skin warned you it would be creepy. Almost as creepy as the Goa'uld dame in your avatar.
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